Kailani wip

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CHARACTER NAME

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2• female • Feline • • Iris •Hunter
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PERSONALITY |

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mute.
Kailani doesn't speak. She may start to open her mouth, to form words, but they die before they manage to come out. After trying so hard, Kailani has pretty much given up trying to speak through her voice. Instead, she's known to use exaggerated body language to try and get her point across.But if she has somthing important to say she will speak
Shy, scared of a lot of things.
She is scared of : Lakes, bugs, Dogs.
She is very quiet, she doesn't want to upset her kin.
She feels like there's no one in the world to be her companion.
She longs for a freind that loves her,.

She wants to have friends,
She feels no one wants to be the evil cat's friend.
She wants her sisters to come back to life.

She wants to be accepted by other cats,
no one accepts her as a trusted cat.
She is evil, vile, nasty and more unpredictable than the wind

• likes | Hunting,killing blood.
• dislikes | Water,bugs,dogs.
• goals | To some day have a family of her own
• fears | Death (Thogh she wont say so)
• strengths | Hunting.jumping, agility,tracking.
• weaknesses | Swimming,talking.loving
• mental disorders | Well she a mute and she sometimes hears voices in her head

APPEARANCE |[/font]

Write appearance here. At least 120 words.

• height |
• weight |7 lbs
• fur colour | None/A bit of grey on her face
• eye colour |Blue
• scars | No
• noticeable features |Stubbed tail
• physical disorders |

HISTORY | [/font]

Write history here. At least 150 words.

• season born |Summer
• place of birth |Far away
• family | optional
• memorable events |If its ok ill put her history here)Kais history is short and simple, when she was born, her parents left her and her brother because they both were weak. One day a family of cats came into their den and by that time her brother was dead but she was healthy. The family raised her as their own until she was 1 year old. Then she left to find a new pack. That's when she meant Scot for an entire year. He trained her, ignoring her b*tch comments and snag remarks.She learned to love love him like a father,one day a pack of lone dogs attacked him and ripped him to shreds infront of her.Thats when she turned shes turned ruthless killer she only trusts cats and will shred any dog that comes close.

SAMPLE |

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Tessa looked Around her "wow"she thought only to realize shed spoken aloud starteld by the electronic sound to her own voice. She was in the Magic Kingdom. At night.Alone. There an old man with snow white hair and ice blue eyes in his hand was a small fob with a red button he pushed the button and every thing went black.She sat bolt upright in bed woha wat a strange dream she thought she got out of bed and got ready for the trip to School it was at first normal but then out of no ware came a motor bike heading straight at her she veered out of the way but it came right at her it was a collision course.

• link to image of character | browse.deviantart.com/resources/?q=Sphinx+cat#/d1mdjrr
• where did you find CR? | .BattleBorn

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[`K E Z Z I ♥♥]

Pending!

Hey there! Before I can accept your bio there a number of issues that need to be addressed :-)

• If you could put her breed in between 'feline' and 'iris' that would be great, if you look at the bio form you will see
  
  
• Her personality needs to be 200 words however you have only written 151, perhaps you should elaborate a little more on why she is scared or why she longs for a friend etc etc. Could you also ensure that the personality is written out in depth, and not just listed, that way we can get a better overview of how and why your character acts. Could you also expand on the voices in her head, and her evilness. How is she evil and why does she have these voices? One last thing is that it is unlikely a blood-thirsty character is going to be shy, if you know what I mean?
  
  
• Well, you haven't written her appearance so that needs doing 8D and it must be 120 words long please (': You also need to enter her height.
  
  
• Her history is also too short as it needs to be 150 words long and can you please put it beneath the 'history' section, just to make this clearer and stuffs? The memorable events are for the most important moments in her life, e.g a relative dies or she falls in love.
  
  
• As for your sample, it is only 120 words long whereas the requirement is that you write 250 words. This let's us know that you will be able to consistently post this amount!
  
  
• Also, we are a literate roleplay and there are numerous errors with your grammar and punctuation in your sample as well as your biography in general. Please use the spell check for the entire application and the sample post, then manually check for mistakes that the spell check did not pick up!
  
  I think that's everything?